Mickie promo!

[kufi]

Mickie James starts to run toward the ring. She seems to have a spring in her step. She is running to the ring to her brand new music, which happens to be sung by her. The name of the song is "Are You With Me".




King: hello everybody I am here live in Los Angeles, Calofornia. I am, thank God, here along thanks to Micheal Cole being sick.I was tired of that freak. Well, anyways up there in the ring is none other than Thy WWE diva, Mickie James.

Mickie: Hello WWE universe. Are you with me!? I hope you guys are. Cause i have a tough tag-team match coming up. How ever, I have a great partner with me. And she is THE HANNAH BETH!!

The crowd leaps up to the name of the number 1 contender for the Women's Title.

Mickie: Yeah thats right. Not only will it be me, but it will also be the future womens champion all on one team! Now, are you with us?

Crowd: YES YES YES YES!

Mickie: But now to our oponets. it will be Maria,[crowd has no reaction at all] and Katie Lea, the women's champion!{crowd turns into an instant boo at her name. The children cry.}

King: And it looks like she upset some of the fans with the mention of the women's champion, the diva killer, Katie Lea.

Mickie: Oh, and Katie, your title reign will not last for long. Now bye WWE universe!

Mickie James walks away to her NEW music as she gives her hat to an adorable young girl who was wearing a Mickie James shirt.

[Vince McMahon]

Good Job Mickie..your improving..

[Stasis]

I'm with Vince, I definitely see improvement in there.

[kufi]

yeah but it is just so SHORT!

[Stasis]

There is no use complaining, try your best to make it longer. Try adding in some commentary, add some crowd reaction and talk about your opponent. Being face, you could even talk about how great the crowd is and how you are fighting in this industry for them. Take a look at some of the quality rp's on this site, no doubt, you will find some pointers there.

This rp may be short, but there is improvement in there. Don't worry too much about length as this fed's ever prevalent philosophy is: "Quality over quantity". Good luck

[kufi]

hey thanks nice words of advice!