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Post by wabsterz on Feb 12, 2010 21:39:53 GMT -5
Very good, but next time, maybe don't put so many
between each line. Sure, it makes things look longer, but it can be annoying to keep scrolling down.
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Post by Vince McMahon on Feb 12, 2010 22:08:51 GMT -5
Much Improvement..but like John said..No need to space it out that match. Try to do a promo without one liners..a three line paragraph looks better than a one liner anyday.
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Cody
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Post by Cody on Feb 12, 2010 23:52:59 GMT -5
If I may bring it to your attention... length is not everything although in a heated match where many of the opponents are equally matched, it comes in handy. I see you were trying to space things out to make it appear longer but for the most part, quality over quantity. If you build on adding more match reference, storyline, and gimmick.. length will come in due time. Other than that, you are on the right track and I hope to see you improve in the next few weeks.  |
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Post by hannabeth on Feb 13, 2010 8:28:00 GMT -5
*shakes head* Hanna is booed....lol :] good luck! and good job!
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Post by kufi on Feb 13, 2010 9:40:35 GMT -5
thanks you too!
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