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Post by Christian Knight on Mar 17, 2014 22:01:16 GMT -5
I have a song to play
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Post by Jon Moxley / The Wyatt Family on Mar 17, 2014 22:03:18 GMT -5
Clever
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Post by Deleted on Mar 17, 2014 22:06:10 GMT -5
hehehehehehe
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Post by Vince McMahon on Mar 17, 2014 22:48:39 GMT -5
This is ridiculous. First Robin and Scott event. Now this. This shit has to stop and we have to learn how to deal with shit better.
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Post by Crush on Mar 18, 2014 6:58:30 GMT -5
Undefined/Shepherd: Could have been an easy read if it weren’t for the over dramatic spaces during three counts. Not every match needs this. Must it be so drawn out?
Last Man Standing: short, sweet. Nothing less to say
Crush/Rufio: The squash I predicted it would be since I thought my opponent would no show and didn’t put much effort into it. Also, the writer should be aware that he wrote Rufio morphed into Crush as he was on the top rope for the Bangarang. Crush pinned Crush, so I guess I actually beat myself.
Zak Jax: short.
Steele/Knight: A match that fired up some controversy.
All in all, this show is all over the place. Perhaps it’s the writer, activity by the participants in the show, I dunno.
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This . . . . . . . . . gets . . . . . . . . . . . Tedious to read.. I mean, I get it’s useful to build suspense, but it’s over done. Save it for a big match that MEANS something. Not for a RAW unless it’s the main event. This is the biggest critique I can give about this fed’s show style.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 18, 2014 7:41:44 GMT -5
New GM will change the show style. Don't worry.
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Post by Vince McMahon on Mar 18, 2014 11:46:34 GMT -5
Crush, I agree with the show being everywhere. Hopefully next week can be a lot better.
Triana's segment added. Make sure to check that out.
Two more reviews.
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Post by The Predator on Mar 18, 2014 15:09:05 GMT -5
they results were awesome boss
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Post by Christian Knight on Mar 18, 2014 15:12:43 GMT -5
that's a tight banner there predator I love it.
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Post by Christian Knight on Mar 18, 2014 15:18:28 GMT -5
the new gm can take over now if he wants to.
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Post by Beno on Mar 18, 2014 16:24:32 GMT -5
The new GM will take over when it's time.
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Post by "British Brawler" Zak Shields on Mar 19, 2014 13:27:24 GMT -5
REVIEW TIME!!!!
Opening Segment - Liked it alot, really tied into Scott leaving and filling the open spot, Cudos to Undefined for earning the spot.
Rey's Segment - Nice way to show your still about dude hopefully you get a match next week mate.
Match one - I wrote this, any feedback would be nice, however i didnt write the commentators parts cheers to whoever did that (Blade)
Match two - meh, nothing more need be said.
Match three - Nice win by Rufio, match was well written nice mid card material. Hope your run continues mate.
Triana Segment - Nice call for a rematch with Demmie, Still waiting for MY TV title shot but hey its a good feud for you two right now.
Match four - Punches and a pin, not really a decent match here, sorry call em as i see em. I did ask Blade to make Zak look "not himself in the match" but would have been nice with a few moves.
Main event - Great match topped off with all the entrants of the EC in a free for all. Nice shoot there Ken keep up the good work.
PS - It shouldnt take this long to get 3 reviews guys. It shouldnt always be the same 3 guys doing it but its not hard guys come on. 1 more.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 19, 2014 21:47:35 GMT -5
www.youtube.com/watch?v=1o2TZrGkfZAs 1.0- The segment kinda put over both Scott Wilson and Christian Knight in a way. Christian talks about how Scott was the biggest challenge in his career and how it sucks to see him go. However, he doesn't downplay the fact that he beat Scott Wilson and that everyone was still disappointed in the fact that Scott never won the World Title. s 1.2- I'll be honest, I skimmed this segment but I caught the point of it. Basically responding to Triana and all that. A nice build up to the eventual blow off match. m 1.1- Like all the majority of the matches on this card, it was a pretty short match. I was actually surprised that Undefined but that isn't in my control and all I can do is accept that decision made by the staff and move on. m 1.2- Another Beno squash match. Now there was a lot of controversy around these matches. But you have to understand, Beno has lost not once, but twice to Christian Knight in a title match. Then on top of that he lost to JTB at WM IV. The way booking works, you have to build someone up so they look like a threat. If I beat Beno after he has already lost three important matches in a row then what does that do to my overness with the crowd and in the company? He no longer looks like a threat so beating him is pointless. But, in order to make Beno look like a threat heading into the chamber, we have to have him slay a bunch of jobbers in order to get his heat back. These matches aren't for nothing and it isn't much to complain about. If you think that they are taking up space on the card that what about some of my matches? I lost to Blade and faced him again the following week. We had a different finish to get my heat back from losing to Blade. Or when I lost to Christian Knight and I had to get my heat back by jobbing out Kurt Orton. Of course, that is out of the ordinary and KO would've gotten jobbed even if he rped. But the point is that there is more to booking a show than just trying to pack everyone on the card. It wouldn't matter who it is, everyone will lose heat when taking big losses and they will begin to suffer if they don't get their heat back. But I digress, let us continue. m 1.3- This match was somewhat longer than the other matches on the card excluding the main event. But Crush simply made a mistake and thought that his opponent wasn't gonna put anything of worth up. Which is, like I said, a mistake. I probably would've done the same thing if I didn't hear from the opponent but meh. Good match nonetheless. s 1.3- A reply to the segment cut by Rey earlier. Like I said, a great way to build up to their eventual blow off match. However, this match doesn't have enough heat behind it yet. It has an exceptional amount but we could more behind it to make it better. e.g having one of those tag matches where they are on the same team or have one run out and attack them post match or even pre match. m 1.4- Squash. Nothing here. Let us move on please. m 1.5- The main event was actually not that bad. Now I [partially] understand Steve's reasoning for leaving but like I explained in the Beno fiasco... When you have the Intercontinental Champion and the World Champion versing each other; unless you're going to unify the titles, then the match is practically useless. We have Steve Steele, who already has to worry about Blade and his MITB briefcase. Add in the hungry mid carders that wish to move up from the lower reaches of the card and Steve has a lot to worry about. Then we have Christian Knight: Thy's fighting champion. He has a chamber to compete in with seven other competitors instead of 5. He has Beno, JTB, Freeman, etc to worry about just to name a few. So neither champions can take a legitimate lose because neither can afford to lose heat when they both have titles to defend. Looking weak while defending a title... Now come on now. A brawl was the real only way out. A tainted victory on either side would call for a legitimate rematch to occur some time down the line and while they are both still the champs, it can't happen. So I think the brawl was the best way to go about things. FUN FACT: In order to advance a storyline, some matches will require a storyline ending. So to complain about having to be in a storyline match when this is a federation that replicates real life wrestling, then I don't know man. I don't know. Overall for Raw 1.26- My perspective of the show is different than everyone else's. Maybe it is because I have a somewhat impactful grasp of match psychology and I actually know how to book, simulate, and choreograph same. But other than a few things, this was a great Raw in my opinion.
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Post by Christian Knight on Mar 20, 2014 0:18:15 GMT -5
1.5- The main event was actually not that bad. Now I [partially] understand Steve's reasoning for leaving but like I explained in the Beno fiasco... When you have the Intercontinental Champion and the World Champion versing each other; unless you're going to unify the titles, then the match is practically useless. We have Steve Steele, who already has to worry about Blade and his MITB briefcase. Add in the hungry mid carders that wish to move up from the lower reaches of the card and Steve has a lot to worry about. Then we have Christian Knight: Thy's fighting champion. He has a chamber to compete in with seven other competitors instead of 5. He has Beno, JTB, Freeman, etc to worry about just to name a few. So neither champions can take a legitimate lose because neither can afford to lose heat when they both have titles to defend. Looking weak while defending a title... Now come on now. A brawl was the real only way out. A tainted victory on either side would call for a legitimate rematch to occur some time down the line and while they are both still the champs, it can't happen. So I think the brawl was the best way to go about things. FUN FACT: In order to advance a storyline, some matches will require a storyline ending. So to complain about having to be in a storyline match when this is a federation that replicates real life wrestling, then I don't know man. I don't know. This.
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Post by Vince McMahon on Mar 20, 2014 0:58:07 GMT -5
Awesome, we have our three reviews. New card tomorrow, with it being almost 2am here. I will make sure its up tomorrow, don't worry.
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